Tuesday, June 13, 2006

Haiku the Second

Soundly beaten by Wendy in Round 1, I dig back into the box for my second at bat, mixing sports metaphors as I go.

Topic Two: Guitars

Steve's entry:

Sleek and curvaceous.
Fingers fall toward six taut strings.
Coaxing out her song.


Wendy's entry:

Santana can play
guitar with left or right hands -
he's a switch hitter.

5 Comments:

At 11:58 PM, Blogger Brady said...

Hmmmm. Hard for us GUYS to decide. One reminds me of a woman, the other of sports...

 
At 10:54 AM, Blogger Generous Kitchen said...

I think you take this one, Steve.

 
At 10:56 AM, Blogger Thurman8er said...

Did Brady just call me a woman? Well, I never.

 
At 2:12 PM, Blogger twinmommy said...

My vote goes to Wendy... of course, motherhood dulls the senses sometimes. At other times though, it does not diminish fierce loyalty.

 
At 5:42 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Wow...this is GOOD STUFF! Quite frankly, I would call this one a "tie". Steve...yours is one of great beauty...lyrical and romantic...I KNEW you had a Right Brain in there functioning!
Wendy...yours is quite clever...ingenious...great guitarist with a hint of baseball. Steve, you GOTTA appreciate that sentiment! Love Santana, but MORE love Mark Knopfler!! (That would have fit too, but don't know if he's a "switch hitter")

 

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